Diamond Friendship

Indonesian??

Nice

Whoo

Hey, i just wanted to say some things abt the majority of these comments. I understand that you all have opinions and such, but maybe some things you shouldnt share. Saying that someones art is messy or bad, can make them wanna stop drawing and not continue. Giving them good and nice feedback, will probably make them feel good and continue working on stuff. And honestly, i doubt that a lot of you here even know how to make a kocho game. Love the work by the way!

The characters are so cute! I love seeing stories about friendships. It's a nice break from all the romance. (Though I do like that genre) 👍😊 Also, I just wanted to say that even though I see some things that could be improved upon, one of the most important things is to have fun. I think a great way to improve is by continuing to do art and having fun doing it. And after all, you worked so hard on it, why not show it to others? You don't have to be professional to post your art.

Could definitely improve on the grammar. (don't mean to sound rude) The story could also improve as it was kind of boring to me, but that's probably just because I don't like most stories without mystery or romance. (that doesn't mean stories that aren't one of those two genres can't be good though) I can tell they worked hard and spent a lot of time on the drawings though, and the hard work really payed off! ^^ My final rating: 6/10, it needs improvement but it's cute. :)

I think you should share this on Facebook so you can see how it works out for you 😉😄😊😜😏😀

Instead of focusing the support that you wanted to get or even showing them your paypal for donation, you need to improve when it comes to writing and art because to be honest, it's indeed messy. And it isn't that easy to understand because most of them acts the same even if you think they are not. What you have done is great and I am proud that you atleast have tried to do something that you'll be proud of, but I think it's also better for you to practice first, goodluck! ❤

I like diamond...

I like it :3