School of surprises! Version II

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Кисуми моя жена💋💋💋

The music needs to be improved, sorry if im being rude but bgm is not very good Now, I love the character designs! I think they all look amazing! I genuinely couldnt choose to hang out with first And I liked the plot twist as well! But I feel like some scenes (Like when you hang out with the girls) need to be longer. Could just be because I read to fast tho. Also the character traits are obvi inspired by ddlc, and need to be more original imo. The bg needs to be improved too. Overall 6/10!

Akemi is best girl 🩷🩷🩷

I loved the art style slay

Omg love the ddlc vibes :)

есть какие то ещë концовки? Пока нашла только одну

So good haha

Ddlc???

Wait is gore even allowed? oh yeah games in app store have gore so i guess its ok. lol

HELP THIS REMINDS ME OF DDLC

Hi, It’s Cinnamon! You can find the current version on the discord server!!

So cool i liked the plot twist !

Лучшая игра во всей вселенной

pretty good 👍

Доки доки?

Я вам арт нарисовала)

I like this game

Reminds me of Doki Doki liturature club

I LOVE ITTT

What The Heck Just Happend About Ending No good ending

This hurts my soul [positive] Overall 9/10 Cons: not very original story Pros: overall fun, low budget horror movie vibes and i mean that in the best way possible

YAAAAY 2ND VERSION

THE COPY OF DDLC???

This specific visual novel is so comforting for no reason.. ITS LITERALLY THE BEST i read it like a few years ago and its like deja vu

How do you make the backgrounds dissapear????

Akemi needs more therapy than me lmao Also I AGREE VIOLENCE, PEOPLE'S SUFFERING, BLOODS, GORE, THOSE ARE REALLY GOOD TO ENJOY, AKEMI IS RIGHT-

I love how you got inspired by DDLC! I was wondering if it’s okay if I remake this. I’ll make sure to credit you. - Diabolos

I knew the first victim will die just like sayori. She dissapeared from the room

Wooah! I just finished it, it was so cool!

Only 500 letters allowed!? ;-; I was going to do an in-depth critique hehe: Maybe I’ll make a YouTube channel just for that lol~ In the meantime, cute game! There are some amazing choices you made as an artist, and then there are some small nitpicks I have. The big one is that the first choice you make does not matter. Choices like these make a world feel fake. Now, the choice where you choose which girl to spend time with, while it doesn’t change the end, it does serve the story well!

this is like a doki doki literature club but with a more intresting plot

мне напомнило доки доки

You can tell this was made by a kid. Doesn't need 13+ warning. It's an ok game, but it could definitely use work.

zomg i love this game!!! it has a certain charm about it

Omgg akemiii and Kisumu there so hot and idk whyy

Kinda reminds me of DDLC haha Also, Kisumi, more like kiss me /j /j /j /nsx /lh /i dont even like her that much (no offense) but i wouldnt miss that opportunity for the world lmao I love how you colored the eyes, and the character designs arent too crazy either!

Woah

Please Read Me At The Full Version on gmail [email protected].

Can Wait For The Full Version!!

I loved this novel so much, the characters, amazing, the story ,amazing, everything was amazing. Tbh when she said hang in the art room, I thought the same fate of sayori happened to hanako! Anyways this novel is amazing! ❤️❤️❤️

I think of Etsuko as Sayori, Hanako as Natsuki, Akemi as Yuri, and Kisumi as Monika

AKEMI💗💗💕❤️❤️❤️💕💗💗💕💕💕❤️❤️❤️❤️💕💕❤️💗💗❤️💕💕❤️❤️💕

I liked this! The story was simple but engaging the characters were distinct and I loved the phycplogical factors to it! Great story

When she said hang in the art room I thought it was like rope..thank God lol

ddlc 0.2

It feels like ddlc vibes and I'm making a ddlc game!

I love it! Is there any way I can contact you? I wanna make the game even better!

I am getting ddlc vibe from this game and I love it!

So cool

just played it and honestly 6/10 could be better, like, the art could be a bit better, the BGM too, and it could have more choices and more endings. also the ending made no sense tbh.

the vn is so cool, i love it! ♡♡

How do you do it?! -Colleen

As someone who recently joined the student council, I can confirm this is exactly what it's like. 10/10, it's giving ddlc vibes and I love that. I do wish that the choices actually made an impact on the story, but it's still a lovely novel nonetheless.

This visual novel is nice! It just looks like ddlc lol and i think the art for the BG needs to be a little bit better, overall i like it

DDLC be like:

Amazing while going theough the story i enjoyed it so much i drew fanart ><

I like it so far, not a fan of the art but ive never seen a story with a haunted spirit, although i think the ending doesnt make sense, its overall a 7/10 for me! also is this ddlc inspired?

Even if it's REALLY made on DDLC(doki doki literature club) way, its cool, you should make more about this so here is my list of thing to do: Upgrade musics(they sound not that great i think) Upgrade backgrounds (the classroom, the camera panel) Upgrade the story (like personnal stories for different girls maybe) Thank if you read until here

I love this! It's like DDLC with different characters

how to publish your work?

I really like the story but I do feel like it could be a bit better. I also think your art is really cool and you should keep up the good work. <3

Ddlc

Amazingg!

Yoooo the storyline is epic

This is so cool

Ack the twist was good

DDLC in lowkey

Akemi yuri ,kisumi monika ,etsuki sayori ,hanako natsuki

The choices don't make an impact at all, but I'm glad they add something to the story

DDLC but a student council

This visual novel so far reminds me of minecraft because the title loo,s like my house that I built on Sunday morning btw I was eating apple Jack cereal when I made the map so other than that THIS IS A VERY GOOD GA,EXCITING G AME

Don’t see how people enjoy this tbh..I can tell you tried but this game has many flaws and grammar errors. Not the best of games on here. Keep trying, though. You’ll get better. -maccy

Love the story already,I’m not done with it yeah but also I didn’t even know I was a Boy in the Story but yeah ✌️

WOW

Omg my fav novel

Damn this is a ddlc thing but student council

Doki doki pocket edition. I like it!

I really don't know why this reminded me of DDLC and myself thinking that this is an innocent game lol. Well, i really like this visual novel and this is one of my favorite visual novels lol

Idk why people compare this to ddlc, the only similar thing is the character's personalities and that they're a club? Ddlc didn't create clubs. Anyways, great visual novel!

OMG I loved it! I thought it would be like ddlc but it wasn't. It's so cool! UNDERRATED!!!

Look like ddlc too me

Ddlc?

O PLOT NO FINAL ❤❤❤

You know what I'm going to say. D D L C - Germán Alcaraz Barajas, JBT Developer

I acctualy don't find this game related to ddlc. I mean, DDLC is not the only game with clubs and didn't own it, there is lots of horror game, and the personnalities are the most used. What is related to DDLC? I find the game pretty original and the plot twist is amazing! It was so cool and I love it! My favorite from now on. -Moochy

ooooh ddlc vibes but with a cool twist :0 nice!

After I saw the comments, I thought the story would go similar to DDLC. However, I am surprised to see it ends in a different direction after I played it. Really glad you incorporated story inspirations from multiple sources. Kudos for adding in original drawings of your own! Looking forward for more 💖 - Raineyellow ⭐

Quick question: could you maybe make a version of the game where you play as a girl? Then the player could go to the sleepover, and it's more comfortable for female players. I myself am a girl so it was weird playing as a boy hahaha. Also, I find that it is much too short. That's just me personally, but I would find it much more enjoyable if it was about as long (or maybe slightly shorter than) Monsuta Hunters? Also VERY similar to DDLC, Etsuko is essentially Sayori. -Bunny

Love it this is so underrated

Is this DDLC x 7rumorsandthemysteriousforum?

Haven't played yet but gives me ddlc vibes

Budget dokidoki but its fine lol